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His footsteps sounded like broken glass,
Each step had a matching hum of dropping blood
With reverberations that sent me crying.
Curtains strangle me as I watch him nearing,
Silken cloth with thorns that kept me in my place.

My movements defined a slow reaping,
A reaping that I have survived long ago,
Thro, all the scars are still visible and far from healing.
His footsteps became louder, my crying was louder,
My throat has dried up from endless sobs.
My weeping was as silent as the dead of night
Yet my tears flowed like a bountiful stream.
He stood in front of me,
Hearing, seeing and breathing my agony
But he's immune to the pain of others.

My eyes were on fire from all the tears,
My throat was burning from hopeless sobbing,
And my courage, I had it, diminished.
End it now, please? I begged in my  thoughts,
Kill me now if it's what you want, just do it now.

A crescent formed from his lips, tilted in a grin
And it told me that my suffering will not yet or will halt.
He lifted a foot, crystalline shards sparkled in the dark,
Pointed and red, they were.
One kick to my chest, blood was all over me,
Spilling as the broken glass made its way through my skin.
I was drenched in red, choking on my own blood.
Another kick, more blood less pain…it's ending.
I could hear him laughing, pleased with his sadistic doing,
One kick to my neck, I was dead.
My body was wretched and lifeless,
He carried on with kicking it with his sharded shoes,
Seemingly in a frenzy with more blood flowing.
My poor body…
My liberated soul.
:iconaysleth:
I feel terrible :'( :skull:

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I wrote a short story about the killer in this poem though I'm not really pleased with it so I'm not uploading it. Anyway, the killer is the narrator's (named Irina in the short story) boyfriend. The bf is suffering from schizophrenia and he doesn't know about it. He left to get some tea, when he went back to Irina, she was something else and he attacked her using the a few from a set of antique mirrors in their living room. In this poem, the narrator is in deep pain and crying. In the bf's perception, she's enjoying the moment and laughing. Schizophrenia :D The glass shards came from the mirrors that bf smashed into Irina and I don't know how to explain how it got in his shoes but, common sense? hehe

Schizo...schizo...I love schizo stories and movies :D
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Mood: Mesmerized ~Sh0KimAmA Nov 4, 2011  Student Writer
This is one of those poems that ill remember
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!Aysleth Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
In a good way I hope :XD:
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~Sh0KimAmA Nov 5, 2011  Student Writer
of course :nod:
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:iconmetaphysical-poet:
You have chosen a very complex way at approching this poem and it workds very well. Very Dark, almost morbid and yet leaves the reader wanting more... Epic.
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!Aysleth Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :floating: If you want more of dark poetry, my gallery has a bunch of them. It's what I write most. So, if you have time to check it out, I'd appreciate it. :D
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~xiongirl Oct 30, 2011  Student Writer
i really like this poem/story... it is so cool and scary and attention grabbing leaving me on the edge of my seat the whole time
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!Aysleth Oct 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad it did, means it's effective :) Thanks so much!
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~xiongirl Nov 1, 2011  Student Writer
you are welcome
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`dreamsinstatic Oct 28, 2011  Professional Writer
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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!Aysleth Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Thanks so much :floating:
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